Watch my video,'Distant Horizons',and then unlock your imagination,and type out a descriptive paragraph. Hey, remember all the features:vivid imagery,sensory details,similes, metaphors,...and let's rock, as Alex would say, right?
The rays come down with a hopeful aura(?) as the sun raise up. The sky lets me be scrared of its height. The coast whispers to me by windy sound. The road is curved like a sneak and is long as if we cannot predict its end. The Eiffel tower almost touches the sky. The Sphinx is sitting steadily. The Colosseum is thinking of the past. The Taj mahal was a melancholy. The road with crowded trees is a paradise in summer. The city is glittering like at which the Diwalli is celebrated. The bridges are wonderful as well as the buildings.
Hi All,
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Watch my video,'Distant Horizons',and then unlock your imagination,and type out a descriptive paragraph. Hey, remember all the features:vivid imagery,sensory details,similes, metaphors,...and let's rock, as Alex would say, right?
The rays come down with a hopeful aura(?) as the sun raise up.
ReplyDeleteThe sky lets me be scrared of its height.
The coast whispers to me by windy sound.
The road is curved like a sneak and is long as if we cannot predict its end.
The Eiffel tower almost touches the sky.
The Sphinx is sitting steadily.
The Colosseum is thinking of the past.
The Taj mahal was a melancholy.
The road with crowded trees is a paradise in summer.
The city is glittering like at which the Diwalli is celebrated.
The bridges are wonderful as well as the buildings.
Hey Daniel,
ReplyDeleteNice poem! I really like your word choices. My favorite line is "The road with crowded trees is a paradise in summer."
:)
Ms. Katie
Hi Daniel,
ReplyDeleteSuch poetic lines! Great going! Keep up the good work!
Ms. Chhaya